You have used good pictures which works well with the mise en scene, and a continuation of house style throughout your magazine. It is clearly aimed at a young target audience through the language and register used and it has been written well.
shes kept it clean and approchable, this makes you want to read the main article on the dps, i think she has thought alot about the mise en scene; the photography shows clearly what type of magazine she's aiming for. i think she could improve on the image on the contents page, it's not very bold and you may not think it's to do with a music magazine.
its quite clear to see, you have put so much time and effort into making these, i really like the double page spread, the pictures really fit in well with the writing and it looks really professional. Also the font you have used for your tite and main text is really good and it all just fits together, and looks really effective.
the magazine shows a clear house style and the photography is superbly done but the front page is a little boring as there isn't much information into the magazine
great photoshoot as it is clear you took a lot of time into it. also like the 'gadgets' section which really shows you are thinking about your target audience. The white background does make it look a bit bland in my opinion
You have used good pictures which works well with the mise en scene, and a continuation of house style throughout your magazine. It is clearly aimed at a young target audience through the language and register used and it has been written well.
ReplyDeleteshes kept it clean and approchable, this makes you want to read the main article on the dps, i think she has thought alot about the mise en scene; the photography shows clearly what type of magazine she's aiming for.
ReplyDeletei think she could improve on the image on the contents page, it's not very bold and you may not think it's to do with a music magazine.
its quite clear to see, you have put so much time and effort into making these, i really like the double page spread, the pictures really fit in well with the writing and it looks really professional. Also the font you have used for your tite and main text is really good and it all just fits together, and looks really effective.
ReplyDeletethe magazine shows a clear house style and the photography is superbly done but the front page is a little boring as there isn't much information into the magazine
ReplyDeletegreat photoshoot as it is clear you took a lot of time into it. also like the 'gadgets' section which really shows you are thinking about your target audience. The white background does make it look a bit bland in my opinion
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